Monday, October 6, 2008

The Nekclace

I disliked The Necklace. there was almost a whinny tone of a woman who thought she deserved more in life for absolutely no reason. she wasn't born to high class, didn't marry high class and she didn't work hard to achieve a higher class. It says in the story that at the ball everyone noticed her and wanted to dance with her, which seems to raise the question as to why she didn't try to get noticed earlier on and marry into a higher station instead of letting herself be married off. i don't think her beauty at the ball had anything to do with real beauty, rather her self confidence and the way she held herself was what attracted others to her

1 comment:

J OBrien said...

Better, but still a little thin. Also, keep in mind that this is an academic blog and please be aware of your capitalization and punctuation. It's okay to be conversational, just proofread for errors before publishing